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A poem i suppose

Discussion in 'UO White Stag Inn' started by Guest, Oct 3, 2006.

  1. Guest

    Guest Guest

    Love found then lost.
    God opened my eyes to the lie that i lived.
    A just wish i could close them again.
    All i had were dreams and wishes.
    I died that day.
    All truths shown and pain revealed.
    I was stripped bear before you.
    All i was shown true.
    You showed me then the truth in life.
    Happiness is but a wish and a dream.
    Waiting to be shown for the lie that it is.
    I hope one day you know what i felt.
    So you know the pain that i went through.
    To forget you....


    I have never been very good at poems or anything like that but i thought i would throw this one out there for the true critics.
    Enjoy.
     
  2. Mandolin

    Mandolin Guest

    I liked it very much actually. Even though its not UO themed.. I was able to relate it to many experiences in the game.. rp, events and even changes to the game itself.

    Well done!
     
  3. <center>The Dancing Orc

    A sight to behold yet best not seen...
    A lumbering orc by the name of 'Thunk'.
    Though kind at heart his actions are mean...
    Be warry for when he backs up his junk!


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    Love found then lost.
    God opened my eyes to the lie that i lived.
    A just wish i could close them again.
    All i had were dreams and wishes.
    I died that day.
    All truths shown and pain revealed.
    I was stripped bear before you.
    All i was shown true.
    You showed me then the truth in life.
    Happiness is but a wish and a dream.
    Waiting to be shown for the lie that it is.
    I hope one day you know what i felt.
    So you know the pain that i went through.
    To forget you....


    I have never been very good at poems or anything like that but i thought i would throw this one out there for the true critics.
    Enjoy.

    [/ QUOTE ]

    It is wonderful! Do write more.

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