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Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Robert, Oct 8, 2011.

  1. Robert

    Robert Guest

    Egotistical ****, needs to learn my place.
    The most beautiful Girl...slapped her in the face.
    The benevolent Goddess turned the other cheek,
    This malevolent devil broke Her, leaving Her meek,
    There is no reason, not an excuse to be so corrosive.
    Unacceptable, short fused, so explosive,
    She thought She was safe, who touches a goddess?
    The demon crept up unassuming and modest,
    She let me so close, armed from head to the floor,
    Again and again, Her heart hurt left torn from Her core,
    Never physical leaving no visible sores,
    Single assaults snowballing into scores.
    Destroying Her insides, with disregard and lies.
    Over and over, how many times will She rise?
    Can the devil relent? With the Goddess on Her last leg?
    Am i really pure when i cry and i beg?

    To my Goddess, i'd carry You to heaven on my back between my wings,
    i'd live for You die for You, be considered just one of Your things.
    Exorcise this devil, and i'd be Your faithful fervent servant.
    W/we'd recreate the world, i'd be Your slave and Your guard.
    W/we'd take the devil and leave him noosed in the yard.
    W/we'd throw stones at his corpse, an ugly reminder,
    my humility and remorse would be my binder.
    Tied by my ankle i'd be happy as could be,
    Exorcized by Your light, the truth W/we will both see.
    i see You as my future, my Mistress, and my wife.
    You're my Goddess, whom i trust, love, and serve, my unobtainable Love, i'm fighting to deserve.
  2. Aran

    Stratics Veteran Stratics Legend -A-

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  3. Ahuaeyjnkxs

    Ahuaeyjnkxs stranger diamond

    Nov 16, 2008
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    it's a poem to Kimmy you fool :popcorn:

    *pun intended*


    Interesting isn't it ?


    I think I really missed a part... :confused:
  4. Falon of Eldor

    Stratics Veteran

    Jun 24, 2008
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    I wish I had someone who wrote something like that to me...about me, for me...
  5. Robert

    Robert Guest

    Its pretty interesting how your interpretation worked out. But it's a bit more personal than that.
    Incredibly accurate, in a completely different way.

    i call Her my goddess to say that She's so much more. It's me acknowledging that there is nothing or no one better. It puts Her on the pedestal that She belongs on.